Treatment - Pineclones

Working Title
Pineclones


Written By
Aalyan Ali (AAMedia productions)

Co-written By
Ben Oddy (ODD Media)

Contact Information
Aalyan380@gmail.com
Benoddy22@gmail.com


Log line
In the shadows


Characters

Aalyan - Aalyan is a character that is played by a a 16 year old Asian teen, he plays a vital role in the movie. He is the first character that is introduced on screen

Ben - Ben is a character that is  played by a white 16 year old teen,  who is the only one out of the three to survive 'The Man'

Joe - Joe is a character that is also played by a young 16 year old teen, he is the dumbest characters in the group which is how manages to get himself killed first.

Clone - The clone is the antagonist in this film , he is played by a very tall man who has a masked face.

Aalyan and Joe are having a normal conversation over messages when Aalyan brings up the idea of them going camping on the moor for a bit of a laugh and as well as them being extremely bored in their holidays. As this conversation is going on Aalyan switches apps on his phone to go onto snap chat , this is when he receives a random message from a strange looking man wearing a full black suit with a white mask covering his face , the message read that should he not share the message on he would be killed very soon. Aalyan ignores the message thinking its a joke and continues his conversation with Joe , this is when they invite Ben along with them on the camping trip.

The 3 lads meet together on the moor and start setting up camp for the night , Ben is being useless which starts to frustrate Aalyan and Joe who insist he comes over to help set the tent up. This is when a pine cone falls from the tree above , and Ben first instinct is that it was one of the other lads to have thrown it , and then also calls a pine cone a pineapple, thus starting to show his lack of intelligence.

As night sets the 3 of the lads are in the tent talking about random things until horror strikes , the flashlights flicker as footsteps are heard near the tent, suddenly rocks are thrown in and the lights come back on and create a silhouette of a man on the tent. Aalyan opens the tents middle compartment to catch a glimpse of the man but all he sees is a blur. He decides to move towards the main door as he steps out he is confronted by a man in a full black suit with his face being covered by a white mask. Aalyan looks up at his face and is instantly paralysed he calls for the other lads , Ben comes out and sees the man walking towards Aalyan this is when he realises the man only has eyes for Aalyan meaning Ben is invisible to the man as the man is about to lay hands on Aalyan , A thud is heard from behind the man and Ben had knocked the man unconscious and Aalyan is able to move again.

Joe soon emerges from the tent and lays eyes on the man on the floor and instantly questions whats happening. This is when Aalyan has a flashback to earlier and to the message he received with a photo of the exact same guy. Aalyan pulls up his phone to show the message to Ben and Joe , Ben looks away as he realises that he will be wanted as well if he sees it he tries to stop Joe as well but it was too late. Aalyan soon realises his mistake and now realises that there will be two of the men looking for them now. Aalyan turns around to see where his man is to realise that he had vanished. The lads realise they need to escape , so they run away Ben and Aalyan run in the same direction but Joe has fled another way.
Minutes pass as Aalyan and Ben are searching for Joe, this is when they come up to his body and realise that he is dead , and find the mans mask laying on his chest. This worry's them and realise that he must be near so they continue running till they stop at a opening to catch their breath.

Ben out of nowhere tells Aalyan to run , Aalyan turns to look at Ben and is paralysed instantly again. Aalyan's head is grabbed by the man and as this is happening Ben picks up a rock and goes to hit the man on the head , the man turns to look at Ben and Ben is paralysed . Ben starts shouting at Aalyan but he is unable to hear him, moments later Aalyan collapses and Ben Returns to motion and the man has disappeared leaving his mask on Aalyans chest. Ben breaks down and lays his head on Aalyans chest.